...Message In A Bottle...
By Phantasmagoria
~*~ Complications vanish in sparkling indulgence ~*~
Cant resist your warming invitation.
Burning yet soothing;
a euphoric contradiction!
Ignite my blood with your bubbly sensation.
Abolish my thoughts, my mental affliction.
Oh, take me away my liquid lover!!
Give me my wings, and unlock
these chains.
From your guidance, I will not recover.
Invincible am I, when you fill my veins!
Drown me in bliss, my toxic companion.
Bring shining light to
my benighted soul.
The waters run deep in your glassy canyon,
But I'll suck you dry, 'cause I'm in control!
Your army of kin resides in the cabinet,
Picking the poison is
ever so fun!
A little too much, and out comes the vomit,
But
theres more of you left, my work isn't done.
I'll
awake in the morn with headaches galore,
But I do not care, paralysis
calls!!!
I'll finish you off, and plunge to the floor.
And your
fragile shell will break as it falls.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ * ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Farewell troubled youth, let
me show you the door!
Goodbye and goodnight, I shall see you
no more...
Author's Note:
Cant seem to get that pesky third line in the 2nd stanza to fit!Comments on "...Message In A Bottle..."
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On Sunday, January 29, 2012, veingo
(526) wrote:
I read this while enjoying a boilermaker :)- CHEERS! ^V^
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On Wednesday, February 1, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Nice!!! Cheers ;)
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On Monday, January 9, 2012, OptimisticPessimist
(29) wrote:
I agree with dwells. This is excelently written and easily related to. Quite an accomplishment on your part. Thank you
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On Tuesday, January 10, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Thanks for the wonderful feedback! ;)
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On Thursday, December 29, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
This was quite the accomplished rummy rant - wish my oldest daughter would take it to heart before she loses her liver. Drunks are their own best entertainment - take it from one who knows, This was very well done and much appreciated - sounds like you know your limitations, thanks. Most mature in scope and perspective.
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On Thursday, December 29, 2011, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Why thank you!
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A former member wrote:
Let's drink to this poem.
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On Wednesday, December 28, 2011, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Ha ha, sounds good!!
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A former member wrote:
You are AMAZING!
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On Wednesday, December 28, 2011, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Aw, thanks =)
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On Friday, December 23, 2011, haunted
(837) wrote:
awesome poem, this flowed very nicely. and the alcohol in this is subtle, yet all over the place. not once did you mention the word alcohol. but in this picture its all around. very nice captivation, very nice poem!!