...Message In A Bottle...

By Phantasmagoria

~*~ Complications vanish in sparkling indulgence ~*~
                                                                                                                                 
                             



Cant resist your warming invitation.
Burning yet soothing; a euphoric contradiction!
Ignite my blood with your bubbly sensation.
Abolish my thoughts, my mental affliction.
  
     
                          
                                                                               
Oh, take me away my liquid lover!!
Give me my wings, and unlock these chains.
From your guidance, I will not recover.                                                                                    
Invincible am I, when you fill my veins!
   



Drown me in bliss, my toxic companion.
Bring shining light to my benighted soul.
The waters run deep in your glassy canyon,
But I'll suck you dry, 'cause I'm in control!




Your army of kin resides in the cabinet,
Picking the poison is ever so fun!
A little too much, and out comes the vomit,
But theres more of you left, my work isn't done.



I'll awake in the morn with headaches galore,
But I do not care, paralysis calls!!!
I'll finish you off, and plunge to the floor.
And your fragile shell will break as it falls.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ * ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
   





Farewell troubled youth, let me show you the door!

Goodbye and goodnight, I shall see you no more...











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Copyright 2011 Phantasmagoria
Published on Friday, December 23, 2011.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Cant seem to get that pesky third line in the 2nd stanza to fit!
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  • veingo On Sunday, January 29, 2012, veingo (533)By person wrote:

    I read this while enjoying a boilermaker :)- CHEERS! ^V^

  • Phantasmagoria On Wednesday, February 1, 2012, Phantasmagoria (121)By person wrote:

    Nice!!! Cheers ;)

  • OptimisticPessimist On Monday, January 9, 2012, OptimisticPessimist (29)By person wrote:

    I agree with dwells. This is excelently written and easily related to. Quite an accomplishment on your part. Thank you

  • Phantasmagoria On Tuesday, January 10, 2012, Phantasmagoria (121)By person wrote:

    Thanks for the wonderful feedback! ;)

  • dwells On Thursday, December 29, 2011, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    This was quite the accomplished rummy rant - wish my oldest daughter would take it to heart before she loses her liver. Drunks are their own best entertainment - take it from one who knows, This was very well done and much appreciated - sounds like you know your limitations, thanks. Most mature in scope and perspective.

  • Phantasmagoria On Thursday, December 29, 2011, Phantasmagoria (121)By person wrote:

    Why thank you!

  • A former member wrote: Let's drink to this poem.

  • Phantasmagoria On Wednesday, December 28, 2011, Phantasmagoria (121)By person wrote:

    Ha ha, sounds good!!

  • A former member wrote: You are AMAZING!

  • Phantasmagoria On Wednesday, December 28, 2011, Phantasmagoria (121)By person wrote:

    Aw, thanks =)

  • haunted On Friday, December 23, 2011, haunted (851)By person wrote:

    awesome poem, this flowed very nicely. and the alcohol in this is subtle, yet all over the place. not once did you mention the word alcohol. but in this picture its all around. very nice captivation, very nice poem!!

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