Oh, Our Thoughts. Our situations.

By TheCreepIngCrow

Specifically Calling.
A thorn!
Not a pedal.

Unknowingly stalling.
You've torn!
My gold medal.

Desperately bawling.
You've sworn!
To only settle.

Separately sprawling.
Beeping horns!
The tea kettle.

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Copyright 2011 TheCreepIngCrow
Published on Friday, December 16, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Cassette On Wednesday, December 27, 2017, Cassette (1087)By person wrote:

    tiny housekeeping note: I think it should be "petal" on the third line. otherwise, interesting little poem. thanks!

  • dwells On Friday, December 16, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    There was an old tea pot poem that I thought this might engender, but didn't. Most cryptic and still digesting it mentally - it went down too easy, probably overchewed, thanks.

  • Devilish On Friday, December 16, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Lovely!! Hello there.. Thank you for your comment on my work, I appreciate it.. Scholar

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