How I Feel, and you?

By TheCreepIngCrow

Let my eyes drift away...
My mind has been picked away.
My heart is feeling sick today.
I feel like someone has kicked my brain.

I scream and scream but no one hears.
It's like they cut off all their ears.
No one cares about my tears.
Full of emptyness among my peers

Life is made to dissapoint.
A broken friendship at the joint.
My heart has no one to appoint.
A penny for your thoughts, perhaps a silver coin?

My life is a candle, running out of wax.
I can't light it again without a match.
I know my life is all but fact.
Amazing how I'm still intact...

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Copyright 2011 TheCreepIngCrow
Published on Monday, November 28, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Monday, November 28, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Much better than the usual depressed drivel that sometimes permeates the website, thanks for something much better here.

  • Devilish On Monday, November 28, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Well well.. How lovely a delivery here.... Nice... Scholar

  • rosemaiden On Monday, November 28, 2011, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    I know the feeling.....thats why i got sick and stopped depending on everyone........they will just kick you when you are down.......you will rise one day, just keep fighting :)....great write...thanks

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