Jack Daniels and I.

By Razor-kissed-wrists

 You brought me back down again here I am in the pit of sadness again,
I just want to lose my mind, and forget about you, have a little fun.
Maybe take my clothes off, you know I get to hot when Jack and I are together.
Jack and I might smoke a little pot, maybe go for a drunken drive
We`ll see.
This is what you do to me, it's who you are. You know I'd go straight to Jack, unlike you he's great in heavy doses. 
He knocks me to my knee's just like you, but you see.. He does it without having to hit me. 
He never smells like others girls perfume, I bet she had a curfew. Tonight, I don't. Jack and I will be out all night. Come after me? I'll have had a few, this time I'll fight back babe. 

I'm gonna party with Mr. Jack Daniels tonight.

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Copyright 2011 Razor-kissed-wrists
Published on Saturday, November 26, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Hehe loved this...soooooo excellent.

  • Taunting The Reaper On Wednesday, February 1, 2012, Taunting The Reaper (169)By person wrote:

    I'm well acquainted with Mr. Jack Daniels and good drinking buddies with Johnny Walker (black) as well. They're often good company. Down the hatch! : )

  • Devilish On Sunday, November 27, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Whew!!! Girl you take my breath away... I bet she had a curfew. Tonight I don't. Jack and I will be out all night! Come after me?I'll have had a few, this time i'll fight back babe.. POETIC.. Everytime you get here ill be here to meet ya... Much respect,, Scholar

  • dwells On Saturday, November 26, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Good one, well done, bottoms up!

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