Log In
Dirty Little Senryu
By WoundsLikeStars
Fuck me, for fuck's sake
And not because I asked you
But because
I'm here
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2011 WoundsLikeStars
Author's Note:
I like Senryu, not only because it tends to be darker, but because I believe it can reveal heart. There's something to be said about just "being there."Comments on "Dirty Little Senryu"
Log in to post comments.
-
On Sunday, May 21, 2023, carlosjackal
(2788)
wrote:
Brilliant, smooth-flowing use of the form.
-
On Thursday, November 3, 2011, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
That's a kick ass Senryu, I have been writting alot of them lately too. Theres something to be said for profishent and concise word play.
-
On Tuesday, November 1, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Lovely!!! I don't want you to get the wrong idea of me.. I have a sick style but it is only realistic senerios in poetic form... I might have something else you may like....
-
On Monday, October 31, 2011, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Echoing my comment previously, I find the conciseness of senryu to pack an admirable punch, equivalent to the other, more complex styles. This is no different, beautifully blunt, write onward.
-
A former member wrote:
Love the pieces like this where the author uses so few words to convey so much emotion. excellently expressed here. Thank you.--Draven
WoundsLikeStars's Latest Works Feed
Join