My Mind Is A Prison

By Antigeist

My Mind Is A Prison

Im a Empty Carcass Sealed in this Tomb

Cut off from the world

Awaiting the day i can rise again

My  Limbs Brittle and Frail 

Too Weak to pry myself out

So i just lye here in my Empty Thoughts and Broken Dreams

My Mind grows Bitter with each thought of my past lives

Hopeing for the day i can walk with the liveing once again

I can feel the thick Blackness encase my soul

This everlasting confinement has taken its toll

On the outside i look normal and healthy

inside im bound gaged and blindfolded gasping for life



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Copyright 2011 Antigeist
Published on Thursday, September 15, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

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  • Devilish On Wednesday, October 26, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    H,mmmmmmm..... I feel you ..... Scholar

  • Ladyhawke On Thursday, September 15, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Wow. I'm taken aback by this. The vividness you described everything with, its breathtaking. I love the way you've weaved the thoughts in here together. An almost animal madness but described in the subtlest way, to where it seems calm, inviting, almost sensual. Maybe thats just me. I don't know, but whatever it is about this piece, I love it. Best write yet. Rock on!!

  • Ladyhawke On Thursday, September 15, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Or maybe I just like this because I know this feeeling all to well. It strikes an honest chord in my soul.

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