Human Tide (Dead Horse #2)

As far as
endings go
this one
wasn't so
bad.

Save for
moderate
changes to
my gravity.

A human
body
like
the tide.

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Published on Wednesday, September 7, 2011. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Human Tide (Dead Horse #2)"

On Wednesday, August 14, 2013, Deadlights (28) wrote:

Love this, great work
On Sunday, September 16, 2012, sheff (137) wrote:

adore. simply.
On Wednesday, September 7, 2011, Devilish (2633) wrote:

I like that... Long time no see miss... =)...
On Wednesday, September 7, 2011, dwells (4177) wrote:

The tide comes in and the tide go out. Gravity - the attractive force exerted between any two bodies; proportional to their mass. High tide equates to being overweight, and low tide to anorexia, maybe? Probably too analytical...Liking the end of line textual presentation.
A former member wrote: i like that last simile very much. imaging the shifts in the body, tiny ripples through the flesh.