final sin

By Evil Ash

tears fall like rain
eyes burning through
red , raw,left with pain

how much can i take?
courage fleeting now
think of your kids ,all thats at stake

one step closer,door locked
razor kisses,soft stings
as blood drips,ticking clock

fading sight ,glimpse of solace
memories ,unfolding lies
now the banging full of haste

smile one more time,you wont get in
no saviors,no redemption
come now,its just my final sin

 

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Copyright 2011 EVILASH
Published on Wednesday, July 27, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Very nice..."razor kisses, soft stings..." liked that line the most.

  • Devilish On Thursday, July 28, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Mmmmmm... The taste of your work sends a lusty shot thru me and I love it! Scholar

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