switch
By Beautiful Incidental
catastrophic color switch -
even the clouds look diseased.
she's
standing before me -
her naked truth surrendering...
where
is that quicksand depression?
she balanced the edge - didn't fall
in.
the air around us - what's that hue -
grey and black -highlighted
with blue...
when did her eyes become green metallic?
or
is that an attribute i devised
to counteract a former conception -
initiation of a new inception ...
i tried to paint a portrait
-
but liquid memories just wouldn't do -
green eyes come closer
-
challenge my self-defined composure...
she handed me
the colors i missed -
the red, the orange, yellowish -
and incidentally
her intrepidness
dissolved my benevolence...
catastrophic
color switch -
now the clouds are intrigued.
she's standing beside
me -
disrobing the mystery...setting me free.
Comments on "switch"
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On Tuesday, August 10, 2010, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
This deserves much more attention, it is gripping. Your words are gorgeous and grab to inspire. Wonderful!
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2010, Meadowhawk
(160) wrote:
NICE! Well versed piece.
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2010, Wiccad
(124) wrote:
Wow that's beautiful, I had to read it twice. Nice work keep it up :)