Depraved And Unclean

By Malcholm Dark

Cut down in the prime of your love
My knife plunged into your back.
I preyed on the heart of this dove
A monster on the attack.


Get use to it girl and get a grip
Quit crying on the edge of the bed.
I crushed your heart--emotional rip
Perhaps you would be better off dead.


I treat everyone the same.


I carry the mark of Cain.


My tactics girl, were well conceived
You fell right into my hand.
I played it out, you were deceived
You have become secondhand.


It's over with girl, it's time to go
Quit crying on the edge of the bed.
I crushed your heart--anguish in tow
Perhaps you would be better off dead.


Depraved and unclean
I'm vicious and mean
I treat everyone the same.


I'm the "I" in team
This isn't a dream
I carry the mark of Cain.


Don't let the door hit you on the way out.


Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2010 Malcholm Dark
Published on Saturday, July 24, 2010.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "Depraved And Unclean"

Log in to post comments.
  • Tear of Prometheus On Wednesday, January 28, 2015, Tear of Prometheus (27)By person wrote:

    Quite the meal for the hunger of twisted lust. I think everybody should embrace his or her monster once in a while as long as it´s kept in the head. This is a really good way to keep fed and in check I think. Amazing work. I really enjoyed it.

  • A former member wrote: This was a dark write that just flowed so well. I really enjoyed this. thanks

  • alex herewane On Wednesday, July 28, 2010, alex herewane (149)By person wrote:

    Gutsy write, probably not the best way to treat a lady. then I don't know her, hope you got some fluid running.

  • Malcholm Dark On Thursday, November 18, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    be assured I would never treat a lady this way... you read about it and see it on TV... it's all about the monster in man...

  • A former member wrote: Definitely deep and haunting. Dark does inspire. Keep writing and keep flushing it out. =)

  • lupus tenebrae On Saturday, July 24, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    The straight up anger and spite in this was something to behold, dark and angry can indeed yield such great results, another enjoyable work. Scholar

  • Bulvine On Saturday, July 24, 2010, Bulvine (29)By person wrote:

    This seems like a departure from your usual dry humor. A little angry, perhaps personal. None-the-less I like your style

  • Malcholm Dark On Thursday, November 18, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    cast yourself outside the envelope once in awhile... but don't stay too long, reel yourself back in...

  • Malcholm Dark On Saturday, July 24, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    yes, after a month long dry spell, I am trying to find my way again... dark and angry helps

Contribution Level

Malcholm Dark's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]

Attention: Darkpoetry is now in maintenance mode and will be shutting down soon. Save your work if you wish to keep it.