Depraved And Unclean
By Malcholm Dark
Cut
down in the prime of your love
My knife plunged into your back.
I preyed on the heart of this dove
A monster on the attack.
Get use to it girl and get a grip
Quit crying on the edge
of the bed.
I crushed your heart--emotional rip
Perhaps
you would be better off dead.
I treat everyone
the same.
I carry the mark of Cain.
My
tactics girl, were well conceived
You fell right into my hand.
I played it out, you were deceived
You have become secondhand.
It's over with girl, it's time to go
Quit crying on
the edge of the bed.
I crushed your heart--anguish in tow
Perhaps you would be better off dead.
Depraved
and unclean
I'm vicious and mean
I treat everyone the same.
I'm the "I" in team
This isn't a dream
I carry
the mark of Cain.
Don't let the door hit you on the
way out.
Awards
Comments on "Depraved And Unclean"
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On Wednesday, January 28, 2015, Tear of Prometheus
(27) wrote:
Quite the meal for the hunger of twisted lust. I think everybody should embrace his or her monster once in a while as long as it´s kept in the head. This is a really good way to keep fed and in check I think. Amazing work. I really enjoyed it.
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A former member wrote:
This was a dark write that just flowed so well. I really enjoyed this. thanks
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2010, alex herewane
(149) wrote:
Gutsy write, probably not the best way to treat a lady. then I don't know her, hope you got some fluid running.
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On Thursday, November 18, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
be assured I would never treat a lady this way... you read about it and see it on TV... it's all about the monster in man...
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A former member wrote:
Definitely deep and haunting. Dark does inspire. Keep writing and keep flushing it out. =)
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On Saturday, July 24, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
The straight up anger and spite in this was something to behold, dark and angry can indeed yield such great results, another enjoyable work.
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On Saturday, July 24, 2010, Bulvine
(29) wrote:
This seems like a departure from your usual dry humor. A little angry, perhaps personal. None-the-less I like your style
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On Thursday, November 18, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
cast yourself outside the envelope once in awhile... but don't stay too long, reel yourself back in...
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On Saturday, July 24, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
yes, after a month long dry spell, I am trying to find my way again... dark and angry helps