In the Language of Butterflies and sun kisses
By Miztaken4beauty
Sun shines on the
-Darkest-
of places.
licking away the
touch
of moonlight and secrets,
That could condemn the soul
or caress the spirit.
And when the light,
kisses the scars
my soul is forced to bear,
I close my eyes,
feel the wind,
as it slides
across my skin,
rustling through my hair.
And for once,
My mask is gone,
A mask of strength
and
secruity,
That the weakest
of hearts hide behind,
because
I want to let you see,
an omission of love.
And I show you
the truth,
:Written:
In a long forgotten language,
That
life is like a butterfly,
But long before I could soar,
You
ripped away my wings.
So now I'm carried,
::on a whisper::
A promise of sweeter
Things
To come.
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Copyright 2010 Miztaken4beauty
Published on Tuesday, May 11, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "In the Language of Butterflies and sun kisses"
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On Thursday, May 13, 2010, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
This read softly as if whispered for me. Excellent visuals throughout those last few lines hint at a promise unfulfilled. I have broken these promises with myself many times and have felt their sting from outside sources as well. Honest and interesting, nicely done.
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Written--On a whisper--of sweeter things to come... this is so good, I love your style... fine imagery... a real pleasure to read, thanks
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
wow, a beautiful piece, powerful
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
"But long before I could soar, You ripped away my wings... " the more i read this the more it sinks into the soul... a very beautiful piece indeed, sad in a way
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(176) wrote:
Thanks. I'm trying to unbind myself from strict rhyming. I think it makes the emotion a more tangible thing.
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A former member wrote:
very beautifuly written. great piece
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Shortnlethal
(65) wrote:
wonderful depictison ^^
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Rowan
(197) wrote:
Beautifully worded and haunting imagery. Butterflies are such delicate creatures; just one tainted touch can ruin life. Nice write.
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Wiccad
(124) wrote:
This is the best piece from you I think. It's hauntingly beautiful.
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(176) wrote:
Thanks. =]