In the Language of Butterflies and sun kisses

By Miztaken4beauty

Sun shines on the
-Darkest-
of places.
licking away the touch
of moonlight and secrets,
That could condemn the soul
or caress the spirit.
And when the light,
kisses the scars
my soul is forced to bear,
I close my eyes,
feel the wind,
as it slides
across my skin,
rustling through my hair.
And for once,
My mask is gone,
A mask of strength
and secruity,
That the weakest
of hearts hide behind,
because I want to let you see,
an omission of love.
And I show you the truth,
:Written:
In a long forgotten language,
That life is like a butterfly,
But long before I could soar,
You ripped away my wings.
So now I'm carried,
::on a whisper::
A promise of sweeter
Things
To come.


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Copyright 2010 Miztaken4beauty
Published on Tuesday, May 11, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dilated View On Thursday, May 13, 2010, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    This read softly as if whispered for me. Excellent visuals throughout those last few lines hint at a promise unfulfilled. I have broken these promises with myself many times and have felt their sting from outside sources as well. Honest and interesting, nicely done.

  • Malcholm Dark On Wednesday, May 12, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    Written--On a whisper--of sweeter things to come... this is so good, I love your style... fine imagery... a real pleasure to read, thanks

  • A Life Without You On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    wow, a beautiful piece, powerful

  • A Life Without You On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    "But long before I could soar, You ripped away my wings... " the more i read this the more it sinks into the soul... a very beautiful piece indeed, sad in a way

  • Miztaken4beauty On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (176)By person wrote:

    Thanks. I'm trying to unbind myself from strict rhyming. I think it makes the emotion a more tangible thing.

  • A former member wrote: very beautifuly written. great piece

  • Shortnlethal On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Shortnlethal (65)By person wrote:

    wonderful depictison ^^

  • Rowan On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Rowan (197)By person wrote:

    Beautifully worded and haunting imagery. Butterflies are such delicate creatures; just one tainted touch can ruin life. Nice write.

  • Wiccad On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Wiccad (124)By person wrote:

    This is the best piece from you I think. It's hauntingly beautiful.

  • Miztaken4beauty On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (176)By person wrote:

    Thanks. =]

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