Fallen (Day and Night)
By The Fallen Angel
One foot in the dark
One foot in the light
One part day and one part night
Fallen from heaven, driven down to hell
Living a lie, provoked to rebel
Unfold my heart and you will see
Blood suspended in starlit nights
It’s beauty takes the pain from me
The shadow protects from prying eyes
One foot in the shade
One foot in the bright
One part runs and one part fights
Tattoos of anguish from a holy life
Stigmata forged within its strife
From the heat of the wave, In your shade I am saved
From demise I’m obscured
Your blessings are sure
Behold my eyes, the crack to my soul
A forlorn boy, in his blood he is slaughtered
Stick and stone that made him tremble
Candle light cast in the water
Drifting deep in the sea
Dissolved to a milky despair
A trail of white that leads
To a place where no one can hurt him there
Falling…
Drowning…
Floating…
Rising…
Seeking…
Coming…
Appearing…
Returning up high in the vastness of motion
Flowing as one in the power of the ocean
The heat of light consumes my being
When the sadistic sun carries out its will
The shadowed love of clouds above
Release my storm in an aqua spill
To some I’m death
To some I’m life
One part day
One part night
Comments on "Fallen (Day and Night)"
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A former member wrote:
My
Thoughts
Do
Not
Truly
Matter
But
I
Feel
I
Must
Say
I
Can
Connect
With
This
Poem.
It
Is
Better
To
Stand
In
Both
For
Then
You
May
Fully
See
The
World.
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On Thursday, March 25, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(177) wrote:
Just, Amazing.
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A former member wrote:
wow. this was incredible...
"To some I'm death, to some i'm life, one part day, one part night" I'm completely amazed. this is incredible.
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A former member wrote:
touching *favorites*
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On Thursday, August 12, 2004, thinevoicetragic
(52) wrote:
Beautiful.
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On Saturday, November 15, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
again, my thoughts dont really matter much.. but you are amazing with words (my boobs seem to agree too) i...yeah truly talented. ~Drea~
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful wording. I got lost within this poem yet I did not want to leave.
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A former member wrote:
Excellent...black..white...cheese
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A former member wrote:
Reminds me, in one way, of struggles with conformity. Especially once you are out of highschool and it means conforming to the world you wish to succeed in. Great write. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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On Monday, September 8, 2003, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
I truly dig this. I just read it like 6 times seeing something a lil different each time.
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On Monday, September 8, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
brilliant, words well chosen, i truly felt this one, ............urban
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On Monday, September 8, 2003, Trichotillomaniac
(42) wrote:
Felt and yet, can be seen through another state of mind, I like this, a lot.
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On Monday, September 8, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
ohh yes.. I dont need to comment on this.. im just glad some people can speek my thoughts so much better then myself.. Monkey
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On Monday, September 8, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
heh...i find the same thing in many write too...
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On Monday, September 8, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
excellent, i like all your writes really, i think i shall dubb thee one of my favorites *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Monday, September 8, 2003, worm
(1194) wrote:
the yin and yang... the voal and poal... the day and night... opposites attract, or so they say... a nice dark read!
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A former member wrote:
Great poem i know what you mean by it very good