On Beauty

By Miztaken4beauty

Would you save me,
From my dreams?
Could you hold me,
When I scream?
And when my words
are ambiguous at best,
And when I put you,
through insecure tests,
Will you look
deep within,
Beneath my mask,
beneath my skin,
See the lies
I never told,
For a wretched soul,
I've already sold,
and still tell me,
[Beauty]
isn't only skin deep?

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Copyright 2010 Miztaken4beauty
Published on Tuesday, May 4, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Adam On Monday, May 17, 2010, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    Well writen, deep thought. When reading aloud I tripped up at the last few lines but other than that I thought it flowed perfectly. Great job. Scholar

  • Malcholm Dark On Wednesday, May 5, 2010, Malcholm Dark (823)By person wrote:

    Wonderful write M, your true beauty lies before our very eyes... every time you create poetry... thank-you for sharing this

  • Meadowhawk On Tuesday, May 4, 2010, Meadowhawk (164)By person wrote:

    Nicely versed. Deep thoughts well written.

  • A former member wrote: wow. this just may be my favorite one. i guess its cuz i can relate my darlin'

  • Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3 On Tuesday, May 4, 2010, Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3 (165)By person wrote:

    Intense and Wielding! Brilliant soulful expressions! Well Rendered!

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