Remember

By Miztaken4beauty

I know he's yours,
You have his heart,
I probably ripped
your world apart.
But when he makes
you twist and scream,
left in a sea of
swimming dreams,
Remember
that all he knows,
He learned from me.

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Copyright 2010 Miztaken4beauty
Published on Tuesday, April 13, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • worm On Monday, August 21, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    nicely played...

  • Malcholm Dark On Tuesday, April 13, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    So very cool... "all he knows he learned from me"... The best ending I've read in a long time... "I probably ripped your world apart"... perfect!... Thank-you for this piece...

  • A former member wrote: dark and dirty, just the way I like it.

  • A former member wrote: dude sweetass poem. really reminds myself of the thoughts i had wen my friend boned my ex. good job

  • A former member wrote: i love it!!!!! its one of my favorites darling!!!!

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