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Remember
By Miztaken4beauty
I know he's yours,
You
have his heart,
I probably ripped
your world apart.
But
when he makes
you twist and scream,
left in a sea of
swimming
dreams,
Remember
that all he knows,
He learned from me.
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Copyright 2010 Miztaken4beauty
Published on Tuesday, April 13, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, August 21, 2017, worm
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wrote:
nicely played...
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On Tuesday, April 13, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
So very cool... "all he knows he learned from me"... The best ending I've read in a long time... "I probably ripped your world apart"... perfect!... Thank-you for this piece...
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A former member wrote:
dark and dirty, just the way I like it.
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A former member wrote:
dude sweetass poem. really reminds myself of the thoughts i had wen my friend boned my ex. good job
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A former member wrote:
i love it!!!!! its one of my favorites darling!!!!
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