Jack Is His Name Pt. 2
By Malcholm Dark
"September
30, 1888"
On a cold-windy night Elisabeth Stride and Jack
meet
They walk into a narrow court just off Berner street.
Like
an untamed madman her throat he does crush
To the street
she is laid with a silence of hush.
But before he can butcher
comes the presence of intervention
And Jack disappears into
the darkness, a quick circumvention.
--Titanium splashes, they
glitter throughout our dreams
and on the edge of a scalpel
which carves unholy scenes.
--The night unleashes terror as death
calls the game
a man stalks the darkness and Jack is his name!
"The Same Eerie Night"
Not a moment in our lives have we realized such sadness
Nor
have we ever witnessed such atrocities of madness.
Only the satanic
butchery can complete the pentagram
So not far away Catherine
Eddowes is found by the man.
A slaughter at Mitre Square,
beneath the nose of the law
Sickened you would become, if
you had seen what they saw.
--Titanium splashes, they glitter
throughout our dreams
and on the edge of a scalpel which carves
unholy scenes.
--The night unleashes terror as death calls
the game
a man stalks the darkness and Jack is his name!
"From Hell"
Now I lay her down
in the street
My knife her body soon will meet.
If she
should struggle before she dies
Her mouth I'll cover to hide
the cries.
From ear to ear I shall cut her good
To watch
her gape and drown in blood.
And when at last she finally
sleeps
I will take a kidney just for keeps!
yours truly,
Jack...
Comments on "Jack Is His Name Pt. 2"
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On Friday, September 16, 2011, johnbevan17
(52) wrote:
Malcholm, I bow down in unworthiness, I wrote a poem about Jack quite a while ago. and it doesn't compare to this. a very awesome write sir.
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On Friday, January 14, 2011, 10 Forty Three
(543) wrote:
I was blown away by it! Amazing indeed!
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A former member wrote:
i got to admit i like this kind of twisted poetry, everything seems so well written, keep up with it bro
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On Wednesday, March 31, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Excellent, I loved the sequel as well, the end where he takes her kidney, it's always good to have souvenirs I guess lol, you sir are an evil genius, another dark write, thanks.