stutterstep; the end

By not an addict

as the one who remained behind,
i feel the urge
to pen some remembrance
of our story.
this latent desire for memory,
a lingering stoicism
unwilling to accept defeat
like some misplaced sense of civic duty
imparted on the last remnants
of a dying civilization.

there is even,
in this twist of fate,
this symbolic reversal of roles,
some innate sense of finality-


as once our story thrived in the brilliance of your words,
so now it dies in the paltry shadow of mine. 

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Copyright 2010 not an addict
Published on Tuesday, March 30, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Friday, February 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    You show off your brilliant sense of rhetoric. I'm jealous.

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Sunday, August 26, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293)By person wrote:

    I have no idea how I stumbled upon this but I'm so very glad that I did, this was a heartbreakingly beautiful piece.

  • Devilish On Saturday, August 27, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I agree... Very nice! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: this has a trembling hurt to it; the closing couplet was indeed painfully poignant and pointed both, but your words, i would daresay, are anything but paltry....they over.shadow if anything.....it is so very hard to come to grips with being abandoned, being left with your heart in your hands, let alone your throat, trying to gulp down emotion......an honest write. a true one. Scholar

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