Asterisk

[There was an introduction here but I got rid of it.]

~

Whenever I speak
Kiss the punctuation
Because all that matters
Is what you can't see

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Published on Tuesday, May 27, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Asterisk"

On Monday, November 29, 2004, Im_going_to_cry_now (24) wrote:

I like it better short without a bunch of words ending with -ation, "Brevity is the heart of length" or something like that
A former member wrote: I love the intro. Asterisks rock.
On Thursday, December 11, 2003, SilentStalker (1066) wrote:

...hehe, I've tried writing exactly the same type of poem...two thesauruses later I threw away the idea...I like the way you kept with it... -Darun
On Sunday, September 7, 2003, Bluegirl (177) wrote:

short and sweet :) I like it
On Thursday, May 29, 2003, Elf (47) wrote:

Haha! I love the intro, hilarious. The poem is short, but wonderful.
On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, DoctorAsh (373) wrote:

:::grabs hair, yanks it out and hands it to you::: [finally] .+. wonderful write buLLET producER .D&A
On Tuesday, May 27, 2003, SeventhCircle (22) wrote:

a longer intro than poem is definitely brooklynish. but the poem is good too. whatever it is.
On Tuesday, May 27, 2003, Sinnocence (49) wrote:

wow i liked what the actual poem said. no one ever thinks about things like that.
On Tuesday, May 27, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (253) wrote:

Heh, I was paying more attention to the intro than I was to the poem... sorry. :-/ The poem is really good too though. I love short works. Next time, you don't have to spend so much time explaining. The poem was good on its own :-)