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"the low"
By Grim_Sorrow
Fail to fall
fail to find
a love as pure
a love divine
forgoing failure
loveless eyes
a broken heart
the subtle
cries
in tears i seek
thoughts in contempt
forever heartless
loveless
limp
for as i sit
for as i am
forever faithless
hopeless
damned
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Copyright 2010 Grim_Sorrow
Published on Tuesday, March 9, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on ""the low""
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A former member wrote:
Quick to the punch and blow to the gut. Awesome. =)
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A former member wrote:
such a pure surge of emotion and depth perception.... i felt the raw passion burn..
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2010, Dilated View
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wrote:
Excellent flow here. A very grim bit of emotion, like sinking in quicksand, slowly and resigned. An interesting read, nice job.
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
My god that was good, thank-you. Well written verse and perfect flow. The imagery was flawless. again thanks for the write.
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2010, Distorted_Reality
(100) wrote:
dude. this is sweet. I really like it. been a while since I've seen you post. very nice. hope to see more
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