Good to be home

By Grim_Sorrow

It’s been ages

long from far
beyond despondent
and yet I return
the ebb and flow of artistry
pure poetry
the idolatry 

it called to me

so long since we last spoke of tired eyes
my streetlight effigy
my undisputed views on modern society
the "Fall from me" faculties of past mistakes

yet here I sit before you

I’ve seen hell,
I've loved,
I've lost 

I'm here...
and right now that’s all that matters.  

try to keep up

the words I speak have long since fallen from the tip of my tongue to the idiosyncratic pages of some transient’s battered notebook
never have my words felt so secure.
so sure 

the nightly recitation,
hail me and holy fuck. 

the shattered dreams
the broken luck 

Yet here I stand  

here I stay 


and for god’s sake let’s fucking keep it that way.

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Copyright 2010 Grim_Sorrow
Published on Monday, March 8, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • GraveFlower On Thursday, May 20, 2010, GraveFlower (240)By person wrote:

    wow.....this is very good..i havent been home for years. i forget what if feels like. thats what keeps me writing

  • Musik2MyEyes On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (192)By person wrote:

    "never have my words felt so secure." ... now THAT is a good feeling! I enjoyed this very much.

  • unspeakable truth On Friday, March 12, 2010, unspeakable truth (94)By person wrote:

    Welcome back The words long since fallen, and yet so much hope in this... Scholar

  • Malcholm Dark On Tuesday, March 9, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    Wow, the best poem I have ever read to use the word fuck in it. lol. A fine piece, great visuals and expertly worded... thanks for idiosyncratic, I see that word enough, and never in poetry. Write on.

  • Rachel On Tuesday, March 9, 2010, Rachel (210)By person wrote:

    "and for god?s sake let?s fucking keep it that way." Agreed. Welcome back. :)

  • A former member wrote: beautifully written! your words are so purposefully eloquent, this piece really speaks loudly of your will and passion... such a revival....rebirth..revision.

  • Dilated View On Monday, March 8, 2010, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    I can dig it. The have been experiences that define us and have brought us to the here and now that we've lost ourselves in along the way leading up to the only moment that matters which is this moment. Thanks for sharing.

  • A former member wrote: Holy S***!!! I think my eyes went metophorically deaf upon hearing the amount of emotion that is found within these words..--Draven.

  • sIo On Monday, March 8, 2010, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    props to this sir. well spoken and well worth looking up to for it.

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