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Good to be home
By Grim_Sorrow
It’s been ages
long from far
beyond despondent
and yet
I return
the ebb and flow of
artistry
pure poetry
the idolatry
it called to me
so
long since we last spoke of tired eyes
my streetlight effigy
my undisputed views on modern society
the "Fall from me" faculties of past mistakes
yet here I sit before you
I’ve seen hell,
I've loved,
I've lost
I'm here...
and right now that’s all that matters.
try to keep up
the
words I speak have long since fallen from the tip of my tongue to the idiosyncratic
pages of some transient’s battered notebook
never have my words felt so secure.
so sure
the nightly
recitation,
hail me and holy
fuck.
the shattered dreams
the broken luck
Yet here I stand
here I stay
and for god’s sake let’s fucking keep it that way.
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Copyright 2010 Grim_Sorrow
Published on Monday, March 8, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Good to be home"
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On Thursday, May 20, 2010, GraveFlower
(249)
wrote:
wow.....this is very good..i havent been home for years. i forget what if feels like. thats what keeps me writing
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On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(193) wrote:
"never have my words felt so secure." ... now THAT is a good feeling! I enjoyed this very much.
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On Friday, March 12, 2010, unspeakable truth
(100) wrote:
Welcome back The words long since fallen, and yet so much hope in this...
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Wow, the best poem I have ever read to use the word fuck in it. lol. A fine piece, great visuals and expertly worded... thanks for idiosyncratic, I see that word enough, and never in poetry. Write on.
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2010, Rachel
(213) wrote:
"and for god?s sake let?s fucking keep it that way." Agreed. Welcome back. :)
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A former member wrote:
beautifully written! your words are so purposefully eloquent, this piece really speaks loudly of your will and passion... such a revival....rebirth..revision.
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On Monday, March 8, 2010, Dilated View
(583) wrote:
I can dig it. The have been experiences that define us and have brought us to the here and now that we've lost ourselves in along the way leading up to the only moment that matters which is this moment. Thanks for sharing.
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A former member wrote:
Holy S***!!! I think my eyes went metophorically deaf upon hearing the amount of emotion that is found within these words..--Draven.
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On Monday, March 8, 2010, sIo
(926) wrote:
props to this sir. well spoken and well worth looking up to for it.
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