The Broken Doll
By Shadow_Kissed5180
A polished, painted smile,
Elegant, still and pale
This
was me for a while,
Until we met and I fell
Now I'm shattered
and broken,
It's all because of you
How will someone love
me?
Completely broken in pieces
Why would someone want
something so old and used?
When they can get something completely
new?
You played with me for a while,
But you get distracted
like a child
On and off attention,
There always seemed
to be something in the way
I know how you like to play,
But
sometimes I wanted a say
That's when you broke me,
Threw
me on the ground
It was always about you,
I was just your
doll
An object that would listen,
An object that would
obey
Now you're gone,
Found another doll that wants to
play
So here I am,
Broken on the floor
An old
and broken doll,
Nothing less; Nothing more
Comments on "The Broken Doll"
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On Wednesday, February 10, 2010, Meadowhawk
(160) wrote:
Full of sadness but sweetly crafted. I enjoyed this write but ache with the pain it contains. Well written.
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On Wednesday, February 10, 2010, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
yeah this just felt so ...sad to me. But it was very pretty. I liked it
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On Wednesday, February 10, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Very depressing, and a well crafted poem. Very good.
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On Wednesday, February 10, 2010, demonofthefall
(22) wrote:
I hope you can put yourself back together......well maybe a few more writes first :D
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A former member wrote:
This is sad. What a beautiful release of emotion. ][ ][