Log In
Silent Asylum
By Deaths Apostle
Your
silent asylum is wrecking my mind
A fire blazes,scorches me, when
I think of you
Words I say, meant to heal, make you choke
Everything
I do, filled with purpose, is only a mistake to you
Now when you
cry, I laugh, you deserve to die
You seem to think I'm weak, yet
I'll make you bleed
Tears stream my face,as I dig your grave,what
you're forcing me to do
My blade sinks in, removes skin from bone,
a token of my love
In this padded room, peace and quiet, I'm finally
away from you
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2009 Deaths Apostle
Awards
Comments on "Silent Asylum"
Log in to post comments.
-
A former member wrote:
I like this one a lot...
gives the reader a great image, they can really imagine it. And put it into place. It has a lot of emotion, flow and feeling in it. Very well written. Many people can relate so its even better. So yeah Awesome job kuppykake:)
-
A former member wrote:
Love the raw power... Beautiful in its capture of solitude
-
On Wednesday, November 24, 2010, nightshade
(120)
wrote:
This one really makes me think of one of my family members. I must say this work was like the screeching of fingernails on a chalkboard.
-
On Sunday, April 18, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Best first line I've read in a while... fine write
-
A former member wrote:
This is awesome.
-
A former member wrote:
I could've said this so many times in my past to some people. The emotion in it it's strong and raw.
-
A former member wrote:
It has always seemed that the "good" men get the shitty women and vice versa. i hate it when you can never do enough to please someone .good ,good write ,depressingly lovely .
-
A former member wrote:
ok this is the 7th time ive read this....i love it =)
btw my friend is putting together a book if your interested in publishing some of yor work
-
On Saturday, October 3, 2009, Deaths Apostle
(65) wrote:
yeah I wouldn't mind writin for a book that'd be a,azing
-
A former member wrote:
reading this reminds me of a girl i knew......
Deaths Apostle's Latest Works Feed
Join