you like me better

By SourInnocence

Kiss away my tears; lick them from my cheeks,
You seem to like me better when I cry.
Close your eyes and enjoy the bitterness,
Of every tear I shed for you.
Caress my bruises, make them hurt from gentle hands this time,
You seem to like me better when I hurt.
Close your eyes and kiss every soft spot you’ve made,
For every look you didn’t approve.
Embrace my bloody mouth, drink me in.
You seem to like me better when I bleed.
Taste the sweetness of my life you steal.
You seem to like me better when I die.

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Copyright 2003 SourInnocence
Published on Tuesday, May 20, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this is great, very touching!!*Dark Angel*

  • manywalks On Saturday, May 24, 2003, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Strong and poignant, loved the read, thanks. ~ mw

  • IceDragoness On Tuesday, May 20, 2003, IceDragoness (193)By person wrote:

    sad how things are like that too.. this is really pretty ~Dawn

  • A former member wrote: this is really great...-melissa

  • blackdarkness On Tuesday, May 20, 2003, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    this is very deep...touching as well...great write...

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