If I Was With You Right Now

By Foreverlost28

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© 2009 Foreverlost28
Published on Wednesday, August 19, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Blood Saga On Saturday, August 22, 2009, Blood Saga (81)By person wrote:

    I didn't know you could actually do that. Huh. I like it.

  • ToxicLove On Friday, August 21, 2009, ToxicLove (39)By person wrote:

    If I were with you right now, my heart would be in a twist, you would look at me in your usual cold way as you scribed my mistakes to your list.. ~Toxic... I think having others contribute is a fanstastic idea.. so here you go.. my line for If I was with you right now... good luck :o)

  • A former member wrote: Toot toot.

  • Foreverlost28 On Thursday, August 20, 2009, Foreverlost28 (18)By person wrote:

    haha where the hell did my poem goo??

  • elisa On Thursday, August 20, 2009, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    exactly

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Thursday, August 20, 2009, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    i guess this is 'fill in your poem'? this could be a good idea. someone comes up with a title and you just write what comes to mind...good idea...-l-

  • Wolk On Thursday, August 20, 2009, Wolk (55)By person wrote:

    beautiful

  • A former member wrote: nothing? *confused*

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