Rain

By eske

If you were rain...... You'd fall from the sky into my arms.


If you were rain there would probably be thunder and lighting keeping me away and inside. If you were rain the glass windows you tap would symbolyze how close yet far you are from me. Sealed shut the windows and me just wondering what to do on the inside. I'd break them without anything but my bare hands just so that with force I can reach out to try to catch you in my arms and in my hands. Clear liquid crystals cool and calm would land. I would wish it was more like ice so that I could actually hold on to what I felt and remember something solid. I would wish the moment would last so that you would never slip away from me. The first thing I would envy if you were rain would be nature because with your product you would help the land grow but you would only leave me wishing you were only mine. I would try but my attempts wouldn't be good enough, A thousand glasses wouldn't be enough to keep you from the ground. You're so much to me that all would overflow. If you were rain I would wish I was a lake or ocean so that you could always come back to me.

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© 2009 eske
Published on Wednesday, June 17, 2009.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this is very beautiful. I love the way the words just tell a story of a lost love and the hopes of a return.

  • A former member wrote: the opening line was enough for me. . .. . the rain appeals to my senses [and deeper] in ways i cannot word. and you personalized that beyond compare in that opening. . .. . the rest was rainfall.. .. . welcome.

  • Foreverlost28 On Wednesday, June 17, 2009, Foreverlost28 (18)By person wrote:

    This was beautiful, I loved the comparison and analysis. Great job and welcome to DP

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