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STUPID GIRL
By prettydisgrace
Another fall
Another bruise
Another 'nothing left to lose'
Another disco
Another fight
Another 'drunken late last night'
Another lover
Another shame
Another 'no one else to blame'
Another tear
Another pride
Another 'no where left to hide'
Another moral
Another drain
Another 'take this to kill the pain'
Another memory
Another regret
Another 'its easier just to forget'
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© 2007 bitter_sweet
Published on Friday, February 16, 2007.
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On Tuesday, December 22, 2009, Joey
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wrote:
I like it. simple but lovely =)
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A former member wrote:
Wow, just, Wow.
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On Friday, April 27, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
Well shit. You callin' me stupid?! I think so...but I deserve it if this is what this piece makes me out to be. Hahaha, wonderful and amazing and the rhyming was perfecto.l
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On Saturday, April 21, 2007, asphyxia
(58) wrote:
Hello, nice to meet you! Thank you for the comment. This is a great example of what a person's thinking when in this sort of lifestyle. I like the use of "Another," because to me, that's exactly how it is.
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On Friday, March 9, 2007, Imsosickxxx
(80) wrote:
Hey, I really liked this. Lovely symmetry with the rhyming, wonderful job keep it up!
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On Sunday, March 4, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
again.. yes thank you all - it is all appreciated. you are all very kind.
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A former member wrote:
i liked this alot it was cool.. hop to see more.. and welcome to DP
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
ha ha sounds like a regular friday night.. no really great. and yesh i be a lover of rhymne too my confidante :)
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A former member wrote:
Very nice
I like it
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On Saturday, February 17, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
I like that your style is unique. very nice. welcome to DP
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A former member wrote:
i like it. its a little more repetitive than im used to but its nice.
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A former member wrote:
I feel like you're writing about me. Besides that, this was good and I loved the flow. Welcome to DP.
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A former member wrote:
cool write. i'm not usually one for rhyming but this was good! welcome to DP. i look forward to more of your writing.
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On Friday, February 16, 2007, Disassembly Boy
(61) wrote:
I love the rhyming.....I'm a sucker for good rhyme schemes.. very nice. :) thanx for sharing.
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On Friday, February 16, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
Thanks 'PRiCk' your comment is appreciated..p.s love ur picture!
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On Friday, February 16, 2007, Drea
(1443) wrote:
This was interesting. I liked the flow. Welcome to DP.
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On Friday, February 16, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
Thank you Drea
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