suicidal valentine

By heart broken suicide

roses are red


as is my blood


violets are Blue


my veins are too


candy is sweet


cyniade a tasty bitter treat


insanity is only a state of mind


thats really hard to find


here i amlying on the floor


with my rose petals all over me,


my violets ripped apart


with a bottle of candy in my right hand


and a blade in my heart


ever since you left me....


love has tasted real tart

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© 2006 heart broken suicide
Published on Tuesday, March 14, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this poem is awsome. i mean it rocks

  • mywristshurt On Friday, July 14, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    im crying really hard inside for you.. but i know that feeling.. the day before v-day my ex broke up with me.. but we got back together a few days later.. and it hurts when no ones there.. very understandable.. i did however like the poem very much

  • D3ADT0WN On Tuesday, March 14, 2006, D3ADT0WN (185)By person wrote:

    awwwwsooome

  • to love a psycho On Tuesday, March 14, 2006, to love a psycho (19)By person wrote:

    *rose petals all over me* i like that best

  • Lucklost On Tuesday, March 14, 2006, Lucklost (30)By person wrote:

    great metaphors too

  • Lucklost On Tuesday, March 14, 2006, Lucklost (30)By person wrote:

    i loved this...."my violets ripped apart" and "insanity is only a state of mind" captured me

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