My Withered Black Rose

By Silence

Slowing down everything to a still
So I can spend one last moment with you
Before you leave my arms, my sweet rose

I see your painted lips
Silver in the moons gaze
Your eyes shimmering darkly

My rose of night
I was lost before you
And now that you're leaving....

I saw the thorns
But took hold
I offered the blood as a token of love

You were my everything
My love my sin
I had my faith in you

I stroked your cheek
Drop after drop descending onto your cheek
Streaking along your face
Bars of blood, bars of the flesh
In prayer to hold you a little longer in life

I have no way to live
Without my Black Rose
The soft petals turned pale
Never allowed to smell her sweetness again

I sleep through nightmares of
A soft touch upon my cheek
A loving kiss 

If I am lucky I will wake only to cry
Having to lose you every night
Year after year
It is more than my heart can take

I write every word for you
I intake every breath remembering you
And with every exhale I smile
No sorrow will be seen

I give an embrace to you on the anniversary 
Then lay you down anew upon the earth
Letting the thorns prick me and blood spill over the ground
Watch as the rose so young withers and dies
Becoming your name sake

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© 2006 Silence
Published on Thursday, July 6, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • kat phillips On Tuesday, February 9, 2010, kat phillips (5)By person wrote:

    this has so much passion and pain I can relate so much to this, good write

  • A former member wrote: The flow, the striking image it creates, I must say that this turns you inside out for the broken beatuy that the poem portrays

  • Sin On Wednesday, February 21, 2007, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    you captured and conveyed a sense of longing and sadness...i saw that rose..vibrant and fresh become withered and brittle upon the grave..this was lovely ~kristy

  • mywristshurt On Saturday, July 15, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    why does everything always have my name in it? it's sweet, but that makes me depressed to think that i just keep bleeding and that i have thorns.. its a good write, but it scares me a little

  • heart broken suicide On Friday, July 14, 2006, heart broken suicide (18)By person wrote:

    makes me very sad...

  • Mahakala On Saturday, July 8, 2006, Mahakala (207)By person wrote:

    ohhhh wow im in awe of this write... as for me i luv my pain and misery, i dont think i can live without it... i've felt/lived with it so long i dont remember who/how i was before i had it... it has become home for me...

  • Mahakala On Saturday, July 8, 2006, Mahakala (207)By person wrote:

    the sadness the ache of losing a loved one is indescribable...the pain is unbearable...escape is unthinkable...

  • Mahakala On Saturday, July 8, 2006, Mahakala (207)By person wrote:

    another one i wish i could put on my fav list... great write ♥Kiersten♥

  • A former member wrote: *cries alot* i am so moved by this poem. i cant describe how that touched my heart. i can feel the soft touch of a hand, the blood flowing... so sad. ~allie, the blackest rose

  • Dissolving Poet On Thursday, July 6, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    This was just sad and beautiful at the same time, my heart is laying at the ground before you so you can crush it into tiny pieces ~nightly

  • The Shattered Heart On Thursday, July 6, 2006, The Shattered Heart (30)By person wrote:

    Awww, this was just so sad. Damn, makes me feel like I'm there feeling the holding and the blood. Wow. I'm here for you sweetie if you ever need anything ~Love Kat

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