Sand from Memory

By Dr Benway

It used to make more sense then this
a picture, an image of something close
like some glamorous yet jaded proxy
condensed into lustful intent.

Sometimes I forget that it's all just a game
one that's never meant to be personal
nobody really gets hurt, right?

A smile, a kiss, a touch
and if your lucky,
one long meaningless screw
maybe even a walk on the beach,
if time allows.

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© 2008 Dr Benway
Published on Wednesday, November 19, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • The Crimson Queen On Friday, December 12, 2008, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    This actually gave me a smile, because I see the truth in it. Good to have you back.

  • Leith Plunkett On Saturday, December 6, 2008, Leith Plunkett (239)By person wrote:

    Ouch. I dont know how I have missed your work. Your emotion is so raw but so effective with its calm tones. Awesome piece.

  • Lylani On Thursday, November 20, 2008, Lylani (116)By person wrote:

    simply put, painfully expressed

  • DIATRICUS On Wednesday, November 19, 2008, DIATRICUS (64)By person wrote:

    splendid...

  • Alanarchy On Wednesday, November 19, 2008, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    Ouch.

  • What Limes On Wednesday, November 19, 2008, What Limes (64)By person wrote:

    Very nice. Almost Bukowski'sn in those last lines.

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