You

By insanemonroe

Bright moon and staggering stars collectively show upon your skin.
Beauty: the ever-present scene.
Time sofly trails by...
Gazing into those eyes I see life.
Flickering, changing, passing are my thoughts.
A soft gentle smile says a thousand things i can't.

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© 2008insanemonroe/katherineLjackson
Published on Sunday, November 9, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: engaging little poetica here. sweetly and succinctly expressed and emoted.

  • Leith Plunkett On Friday, November 28, 2008, Leith Plunkett (237)By person wrote:

    I really like it. to the point but also leaves lingering thoughts. well done :-)

  • RubyXero On Saturday, November 22, 2008, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    so true... lovely write

  • disposable On Sunday, November 9, 2008, disposable (103)By person wrote:

    soft and romatic and nothing short of "staggering". well done.

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Sunday, November 9, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (357)By person wrote:

    lovely little piece here, love the image

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