Camel Toe and what he lost...
By freudian-slip
Light speed spoken drivel
written in marching ants-
perfect formation
Open book retaliation
not quite eloquent enough
for public digestion
But he had it
almost once
when the lines formed up tight
in dress- right- dress
magnificence
offering inspiration of literate proportion
yet now it seems
he can only pull at himself
in effort
to separate
his camel- toe pants
suffocation
of
hatred
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© 2008 the-rapist
Published on Friday, October 17, 2008.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Camel Toe and what he lost..."
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On Sunday, October 19, 2008, freudian-slip
(236) wrote:
always:)
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On Sunday, October 19, 2008, freudian-slip
(236) wrote:
it was about when someone who used to write from raw passion, turns out word vomit full of fake emotion, regardless of how obvious it is. but I like your take on it...
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A former member wrote:
That confused me to all heck, yet it didnt much matter...within my misunderstanding came whispers and shades of grey matter,.. i am curious though: to know whether there was any indication of 'someone'.. not knowing a good thing when it was in-front of them?