Timeshare
By freudian-slip
The importance of location
never
first and foremost
in the decision process...
I strolled along this vacation
traveling
with the confidence
of a monk in a gentleman's club
The intestinal fortitude
of a professional bulimic
in complete control
of what was to become
another temporary heart transaction
Low risk investments
shouldn't frighten
an experienced
masochist
yet to my surprise
the rented room presented
with an isolated
uneasy feeling
The odd-lot furniture
became increasingly less inviting by the second
and the view
appeared never to face the light
Intuition
had not abandoned me
Throwing down
the weighted bags I carried
once again
reluctantly
paying for another order of room service resentment
I took a long
chilly shower
and climbed
with familiarity
into the 180 thread count bed
alone
Comments on "Timeshare"
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A former member wrote:
shit you paint a clear picture,..an entire poem in metaphorical form yet i were able 2 read as if it were in laymen's terms,...that my dear is a true gift of talent...xcellent write.
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On Monday, October 13, 2008, serotonin lost
(140) wrote:
a trip through loneliness and isolation. worth reading repetedly