Diluted Reverent Sektor Ammentia
By DIATRICUS
And what of this non-descript transparency?
What of your non-conformist script discrepancy?
Illusion swept, though ill-equipped
Tell me the why, the what, the how, the motivation inherent
Toward the directive derelict of which you speak,
Lest I might venture forth without you
To tolerate your quips and quivers absent.
Endure a slight ponderance belonging
To a naive transmitter such as I
Who does not seek to tarry longer
On the whimsical natures setttled 'tween
Do or Die.
Alive and lively you taunt me.
Sacred not the sullen streams of dormant despair.
Your tethered nature
Fast held 'gainst another's swollen gestures.
And still it lingers
and still it wonders
and still it wanders
Till it wonders no more.
I wonder,
Though I wander no more.
Answers to the void...
matter not
Comments on "Diluted Reverent Sektor Ammentia"
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On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, AdrianJ
(34) wrote:
Not crazed. Delicate, yes...I get it - not through the words but betwixt them the message...This, I must say, is one of the best works yet I've sefelt in a very long time...RedoubtableNot crazed. Delicate, yes...I get it - not through the words but betwixt them - "the message!" This, I must say, is one of the best works yet I've seen/felt in a very long time...Redoubtable
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A former member wrote:
crazed... .but somehow delicate write. ness
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On Tuesday, June 24, 2008, Scarrzz
(235) wrote:
The pace of that piece almost felt like a strict meter. It was enjoyable to read. I'm not sure I understand it, but I'm sure I like it. It may mean you've been cheated and lied to and just finally said, "Screw it, whatever." I may not even be warm. I think... SPLUNGE.
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On Tuesday, June 24, 2008, snakeskingrin
(59) wrote:
cool stuff...you obviously have a rather extensive vocabulary with which to play...:) snake
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On Monday, June 23, 2008, Aleas
(169) wrote:
I could respond exactly with your comment, but that would be cheating, so I'll give a vague description of how this played out for me. "Wander, wonder, still and wander, holy crap I tripped over my own brain!" Excellent fodder.