Murder Is The Sweetest Revenge
By insanemonroe
A tear slowly ran down her face, burning her cheek like the flames of a
fire
Looking up she said enough, she slowly picked herself off the floor
She reached for the dresser drawer
She quickly pulled out a butcher knife
Snuck up behind him while he showered not to be overpowered
And made him fight for his life
She had, had enough of his abuse
The constant misuse
She would get her revenge tonight
With a quick slash oh so slight
She watched the blood flow from his throat
She waited as he gurgled upon it covering him in a red coat
A grin upon her face as he struggled and fell to the floor
This abuse this torcher was over, his heart beat no more
She laughed and sighed lied down and cried
She giggled and whispered "murder is the sweetest revenge"
KatherineLouiseSerenaJennifeirJackson'08
Comments on "Murder Is The Sweetest Revenge"
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On Saturday, September 8, 2012, archangelmichael
(10) wrote:
It make me feel happy for her honestly. The way you wrote this was great the way throughout the entire work you feel her pain, and that mixed with the overall tension of the words, make for an excellent climactic ending.
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A former member wrote:
Well done....I felt the pain but the relief as well.
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On Friday, May 16, 2008, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
absolutely lovely. :)
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On Wednesday, May 14, 2008, Rebel tiGer King
(239) wrote:
nicely done, Welcome to DP -symph-
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On Sunday, May 11, 2008, melodies revisited
(30) wrote:
I hear song lyrics here. =)