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Angela's Well
By Gideon Lost
A falling star
Just falls
When
No one wishes.
Passively, silently
Screaming
Towards the bottom
Of the Well
To swim
With unfulfilled dreams
If only
There were a net
Woven so very tight
I wouldn’t
Slip
Thru
For I feel
So small
now
You
won’t
even
see
me
.
Austerberto R. Palis, Jr.
April 24, 2008; 03:43am
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© 2008 Austerberto
Published on Thursday, April 24, 2008.
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A former member wrote:
Id dive into tht well if only to make you happy. great write
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On Thursday, April 24, 2008, NikesRain
(1298)
wrote:
saddening to read and it rings like a hammer for for many i'm sure... good to see you posting again...
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On Thursday, April 24, 2008, Sketso
(435) wrote:
Nicely done!
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A former member wrote:
A free falling screaming moment...nice
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A former member wrote:
sinks into your words that
speak so loud. wonderfull write.
~ hdb.
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