Angela's Well

By Gideon Lost

A falling star
Just falls
When
No one wishes.
Passively, silently
Screaming
Towards the bottom
Of the Well
To swim
With unfulfilled dreams
If only
There were a net
Woven so very tight
I wouldn’t
Slip
Thru
For I feel
So small
now
You
won’t
even
see
me
.


Austerberto R. Palis, Jr.
April 24, 2008; 03:43am

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© 2008 Austerberto
Published on Thursday, April 24, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Id dive into tht well if only to make you happy. great write

  • NikesRain On Thursday, April 24, 2008, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    saddening to read and it rings like a hammer for for many i'm sure... good to see you posting again...

  • Sketso On Thursday, April 24, 2008, Sketso (416)By person wrote:

    Nicely done!

  • A former member wrote: A free falling screaming moment...nice

  • A former member wrote: sinks into your words that speak so loud. wonderfull write. ~ hdb.

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