you make me smile

By thelostmessenger

i want you to smile with me,
so close i can feel your breath
on my neck,
to be standing so close to you
breathing the same very air,
inhaling every piece of you.
make me grin
upon your entry.
whether on a snowmobile
or your sexy car,
let it be known
that you have come.
smirk at me from sideways
so i’ll have to giggle back.
the stereo keeps pounding
and i don’t hold back my laugh.
you drop your keys and beam towards me
and again i smile,
because of you.

every second
spent with you
is another second
i smile.

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© 2008 me_the_messenger
Published on Thursday, March 20, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Echoes of Orpheus On Friday, March 21, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (359)By person wrote:

    Every second I spent reading this was another second I smiled, another excellent piece. I have to make some room so I can favorite your profile. *salutes* Well written, well expressed, well done.

  • denver nitze On Thursday, March 20, 2008, denver nitze (256)By person wrote:

    *smiles* ~ta~

  • Narcissa On Thursday, March 20, 2008, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    To just be able to smile at each other and feel good is simply amazing. Sweet piece.

  • i tremble On Thursday, March 20, 2008, i tremble (29)By person wrote:

    I can relate to this. =]

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