Ripening

By CorruptedLittleGirl

Exposed and raw
Diaphanous flesh assaulted by sunlight
Not quite ready to face the day
But knowing that time is turning brown.

Hardening
To form a shell
Tough enough not to crack beneath gravity
And a spine that would a support
A sluggish form customarily supine.

Pupils painfully dilating
Accosted by light so bright,
A hole threatens to burn through
An underdeveloped retina.

Claws dig into the earth
To keep from being blown away by
Unrelenting winds.

And slowly lurch forward
To peak over the summit
And see what lies
On the other side.

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© 2008 CorruptedLittleGirl
Published on Monday, January 21, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • lenores_death On Thursday, November 8, 2012, lenores_death (15)By person wrote:

    seems to truly expose a new day: hope, but cautious, because hope can lie.

  • Syringe On Monday, February 25, 2008, Syringe (51)By person wrote:

    this is how i feel when i wake up lol. great write!

  • A former member wrote: it's always the want.. to feel something anew, to bring new life. perhaps the spring is incorrect in it's blessings.

  • Sketso On Tuesday, January 22, 2008, Sketso (416)By person wrote:

    Crossing the summit to see the other side... something everyone faces, and many flee from. Nicely spoken.

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