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Tuscan Fields in Clouds Eyes
By Revisable Retina
Tuscan Fields in Clouds Eyes
Everything begins looking into your eyes,
me losing myself within them,
wearing sun dresses
dancing barefoot through your fields of Tuscan sunflowers
all my dreams dancing with me,
around me joining me...
all the while you hear my fragile whispers,
feel my compassionate touch
embracing you as my stone,
my shelter soon my lover
gods blessing gods gift to me, is you,
sent as my angel in flesh
I stand in front of you introducing myself
as your feathered wings
I drape myself softly across your back
saving you, teaching you, loving you
taking your fears vanishing them within myself
holding your hand,
my arm wrapped securely around yours
complementing each other
in the most satisfying manner
known to mankind ..
You will be my perfect mate
my perfect match
my angel
*Gahhhhhh hates love poems ew* -SHOOT ME-
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© 2007 RachelDawn
Published on Tuesday, September 18, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, February 2, 2018, Just Dave
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wrote:
sweet poem both in quality and content. Great write. JD
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A former member wrote:
Lovely - and i couldn't think of a more worthy recipient.
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On Friday, September 21, 2007, Sketso
(435) wrote:
Wow... I used to have that. I'm asking that it be reborn... thx for sharing.
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On Wednesday, September 19, 2007, Revisable Retina
(83) wrote:
Love is pure bliss.. Blue birds fly while looking into his eyes.. He will take me away, dream with me, run through feilds of flowers with me... I cant wait.
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A former member wrote:
this ahs a soft spirituality underlying all the romance, the salvation of it all. . .. excellent pen.
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On Tuesday, September 18, 2007, Narcissa
(404) wrote:
Ahh... Love is such a beautiful gift. It is exquisite how you both express how you feel. I hope you never loose that.
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On Tuesday, September 18, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
To be flattered to the extent of gracing your poetry, makes my cheeks blush and makes me feel like the luckiest man in the world. Your words are as delicate and serene as ghost whispers and divine like the 9 muses…. i love you starshine
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