Epiphany (the ebb and flow of a kiss)

By Sin

I fell into the most amazing pair of blue eyes today
And as I skirted the lace of his lips, I felt
Time crush beneath our kiss, all the singular moments
That lead to this point, were but seconds
That spanned lifetimes, and I ceased to exist
But within a heartbeat, as the world melted away
Finally grasping the Godlike structure of it all

That I don't need this body
To think, to touch
To feel, to know

That we fit perfectly together, our sensations
Just the after effect, trembling
Down limbs, that couldn't possibly hold
What overflows their cage, a consciousness
Lost in liquid reverie, as I trickled down his throat
One drop at a time, seeping into fibers and cells
That felt like home, before our lips parted
Feeding starving lungs, as I struggled to crawl out
Of his ocean eyes, weightless and unbalanced

Touched with the vast knowledge
That mouths
And tongues
And bodies
Are just vessels

Mere beginnings, of what we're meant to be

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© 2007 Sin
Published on Friday, June 1, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • punk mc cool On Thursday, April 1, 2010, punk mc cool (79)By person wrote:

    hmm nice write....:)

  • word assassin On Thursday, April 1, 2010, word assassin (7)By person wrote:

    this gave me shivers, a wonderful intoxicating write

  • A former member wrote: the last plea. .. . of truth, such as it is.....more than bodies......beautiful wanderings within this; exquisitely rendered and tender. [sigh]

  • Sketso On Monday, April 13, 2009, Sketso (454)By person wrote:

    Ahh, to ascend... I've been here, in a glance before. Perfectly told tale that makes me want to take a walk with eyes wide open.

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, May 15, 2008, carlosjackal (2576)By person wrote:

    Come back :(

  • Sin On Tuesday, May 27, 2008, Sin (1179)By person wrote:

    i miss you too *hugs*

  • italianbella On Friday, December 28, 2007, italianbella (188)By person wrote:

    magical this one leave me breathless

  • Dreams Of Nepenthe On Sunday, September 30, 2007, Dreams Of Nepenthe (3)By person wrote:

    This was quite beautiful. You flowed wonderfully. Good Stuff.

  • jack paper On Tuesday, June 19, 2007, jack paper (126)By person wrote:

    oh to be weightless and unbalanced .... without taking drugs! excellent, i love this...

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, June 3, 2007, carlosjackal (2576)By person wrote:

    Bloody brilliant!! What a feeling, a rush, to kiss the one, you call your love. Love this, Kristy @=) -Carl

  • GraveFlower On Friday, June 1, 2007, GraveFlower (283)By person wrote:

    so intamite...i cant even spell that word, but its beautiful....*i dont need this body, to think to touch* no,,,,,you take my breath away

  • A former member wrote: i love this...it's amazing

  • Alanarchy On Friday, June 1, 2007, Alanarchy (1141)By person wrote:

    "Time crush beneath our kiss, all the singular moments that lead to this point were but seconds that spanned lifetimes, and I ceased to exist" This left me reaching for you through the spiritual path, decribed in words. breathtaking. I love you, baby :

  • Alanarchy On Friday, June 1, 2007, Alanarchy (1141)By person wrote:


  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, June 19, 2007, Alanarchy (1141)By person wrote:

    This piece still fills me with such a wonderful emotion, lover. My soul is tied to yours.

  • Revisable Retina On Friday, June 1, 2007, Revisable Retina (84)By person wrote:

    beautiful, full of passion, full of truth, awesome write this feeling in this poem makes life worth living i am sure you would agree...

  • A former member wrote: Bravo indeed my friend!! Yeah i think i got crushed by the same comet cloud did... =]

  • Bella Butchery On Friday, June 1, 2007, Bella Butchery (734)By person wrote:

    this made me felt like i was crushed by a comet, a blanch du love, wings grown an inch, or just maybe alittle more shimmer to a glance.... gravity plead me to stop susspending a timeless kiss.... bravo :)

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