Epiphany (the ebb and flow of a kiss)
By Sin
I fell into the most amazing pair of blue eyes today
And as I skirted the lace of his lips, I felt
Time crush beneath our kiss, all the singular moments
That lead to this point, were but seconds
That spanned lifetimes, and I ceased to exist
But within a heartbeat, as the world melted away
Finally grasping the Godlike structure of it all
That I don't need this body
To think, to touch
To feel, to know
That we fit perfectly together, our sensations
Just the after effect, trembling
Down limbs, that couldn't possibly hold
What overflows their cage, a consciousness
Lost in liquid reverie, as I trickled down his throat
One drop at a time, seeping into fibers and cells
That felt like home, before our lips parted
Feeding starving lungs, as I struggled to crawl out
Of his ocean eyes, weightless and unbalanced
Touched with the vast knowledge
That mouths
And tongues
And bodies
Are just vessels
Mere beginnings, of what we're meant to be
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Comments on "Epiphany (the ebb and flow of a kiss)"
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On Thursday, April 1, 2010, punk mc cool
(75) wrote:
hmm nice write....:)
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On Thursday, April 1, 2010, word assassin
(5) wrote:
this gave me shivers, a wonderful intoxicating write
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A former member wrote:
the last plea. .. . of truth, such as it is.....more than bodies......beautiful wanderings within this; exquisitely rendered and tender. [sigh]
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On Monday, April 13, 2009, Sketso
(435) wrote:
Ahh, to ascend... I've been here, in a glance before. Perfectly told tale that makes me want to take a walk with eyes wide open.
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On Thursday, May 15, 2008, carlosjackal
(3014) wrote:
Come back :(
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On Tuesday, May 27, 2008, Sin
(1168) wrote:
i miss you too *hugs*
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On Friday, December 28, 2007, italianbella
(185) wrote:
magical this one leave me breathless
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On Sunday, September 30, 2007, Dreams Of Nepenthe
(3) wrote:
This was quite beautiful. You flowed wonderfully. Good Stuff.
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On Tuesday, June 19, 2007, jack paper
(126) wrote:
oh to be weightless and unbalanced .... without taking drugs! excellent, i love this...
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On Sunday, June 3, 2007, carlosjackal
(3014) wrote:
Bloody brilliant!! What a feeling, a rush, to kiss the one, you call your love. Love this, Kristy @=) -Carl
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On Friday, June 1, 2007, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
so intamite...i cant even spell that word, but its beautiful....*i dont need this body, to think to touch* no,,,,,you take my breath away
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A former member wrote:
i love this...it's amazing
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On Friday, June 1, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
"Time crush beneath our kiss, all the singular moments that lead to this point were but seconds that spanned lifetimes, and I ceased to exist" This left me reaching for you through the spiritual path, decribed in words. breathtaking. I love you, baby :
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On Friday, June 1, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
:D
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On Tuesday, June 19, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
This piece still fills me with such a wonderful emotion, lover. My soul is tied to yours.
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On Friday, June 1, 2007, Revisable Retina
(83) wrote:
beautiful, full of passion, full of truth, awesome write this feeling in this poem makes life worth living i am sure you would agree...
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A former member wrote:
Bravo indeed my friend!! Yeah i think i got crushed by the same comet cloud did... =]
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On Friday, June 1, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
this made me felt like i was crushed by a comet, a blanch du love, wings grown an inch, or just maybe alittle more shimmer to a glance.... gravity plead me to stop susspending a timeless kiss.... bravo :)