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Un-ode to him
By totaltrip
He is my everything.
all that keeps me down.
Without him, I cannot live.
i have no identity.
We will be together for all of ever and ever.
nothing is possible anymore.
Every night, my last thought is him.
of a someday when i can be all alone.
I am complete because of him.
absolutely, fully hopeless and lost.
I am his.
crutch, fallback, constant misstep.
I owe him for who I am.
rightfully broken and endlessly tragic.
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© 2007 totaltrip
Published on Tuesday, August 21, 2007.
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2007, Bella Butchery
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wrote:
fully agree with the capt. irony is, though it is a proclamation of an un-ode, you still seem consumed. i hope you find some peace. excellent and reflective. well thought.
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2007, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
jesus our savior or a lousy boyfriend ... this spit out like a sewerhole .. and still recieved ... the total give away ... "endlessly tragic" ... great piece - funguy
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