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Jars of Love-Shaped Water
By glasshouse
there's nowhere to go but
...crazy.
from here.
And it's much too late
to apologize
the shadows
that stretched ahead of us
fade
as we near another streetlight
-hallucinations-
...of the...
*tinker*toy*type*
and they all sort of
sticktoyourtongue
damn these
velvetries
like curtains
not of iron but of dream
its no surprise
now close your eyes
(I have love for you to drink)
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© 2007 glasshouse
Published on Monday, July 30, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Jars of Love-Shaped Water"
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On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, NikesRain
(1240)
wrote:
enchanting path you've woven in a delicate and supple way.....lovely
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A former member wrote:
oh wow...egads.. ..such a poignant film noir piece; a cloth of black 'velvetries'. .divine images staccato stopped in time; labyrinthian in structure and the ending is so wonder[land]ful. ..
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On Monday, July 30, 2007, Moonflower
(298) wrote:
i must agree with them ;)
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On Monday, July 30, 2007, swing_the_hammer
(48) wrote:
yum... don't even need to drink, i already love it! L
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On Monday, July 30, 2007, Err0r
(358) wrote:
your words never settle, like running through a maze it could go anywhere, but you always seem to find the right ending. Nice write.
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On Monday, July 30, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Simply beautiful, in all all encompassing, overwhelming sort of way. And the title is perfect.
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