under oath

By cemetarydance

darkness covers every inch of me as I walk...alone
my heart bleeds into the snow as my tears freeze
I'm dying with only one wish...to not be alone
I stumble along looking for redemption...save me

Lilly Adams

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© 2005 cemetarydance
Published on Monday, November 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • nnybrooks On Sunday, June 10, 2012, nnybrooks (9)By person wrote:

    I believe we share a wish... i felt this one through and through... loneliness really does feel like the end...

  • NightDragon On Tuesday, June 26, 2007, NightDragon (5)By person wrote:

    That's Great!

  • Alanarchy On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, Alanarchy (1123)By person wrote:

    *I stumble along looking for redemption* Yes. nice.

  • A former member wrote: for a 2 min work I cant wait to see what you can do if you think for a day

  • A former member wrote: Hell yeah thats the shit dude!

  • manywalks On Monday, November 7, 2005, manywalks (772)By person wrote:

    I always enjoy minimalism when it is well crafted, thank you. ! mw

  • cemetarydance On Monday, November 7, 2005, cemetarydance (21)By person wrote:

    I thought this up in two minutes and wrote it down before I forgot.Sorry if it sucks.hehe

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