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lonliness is hurtful
By Alacer_Cogitatus
These thoughts of lonliness,
tear at the seeds of my brain,
I now know that nothing could ever,
chase away the pain,
of departing loved ones,
who have seen me through,
the joy and pains of loving you.
this eternal seperation pains me to no end,
i cant bear it
i need you, i need you,
every day. i cant bear this pain.
I just want to come home.
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Copyright 2004 Alacer_Cogitatus
Published on Thursday, April 30, 2015.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "lonliness is hurtful"
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On Friday, October 29, 2004, dark faery
(28)
wrote:
I realy liked this good job-barb
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On Friday, October 15, 2004, FallenFaith
(44) wrote:
I love the longing here. It is very depressing. You've really wrote something that the reader can feel. Good job.
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, pessum ire animus
(57) wrote:
easier felt for some than others... cant wait till you get back bro... so much we need to do! stay safe, much love
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
full of sorrow and longing! easily felt by all who read this
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
this was like a bulding up momentum to a dramatic climax,that resonated truth,that could be felt on the closest level,superbly expressed emotion
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