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:Unfailing Me:
By Deathkitten
Is it so difficult
to feel the energy
in such a strong force?
Could we match power
or should it stay unmatched?
Would you see deep inside
if it were deeper than the channel
or be fixed & stubborn
as always?
Judging every "mistake"
you feel we make
Observing the lifestyle
& our surroundings
Criticizing each word
that may slip through soft lips
in hopes to harden them
& the rest of us
Will you bury the flares?
Each & every desire?
Would you be happy
if I said I was the job
& you were hired?
Are the flutes & violins
in my darkness
so distant
that no ear may hear?
Would anything ever be
so unfailing
in order to appease?
May we be self-renewing
through passing years
& generations
or must we bow down
in falseness & irritation?
I cannot speak for the rest
but I ask not of you
or anyone
to be me
All I asked for
was room to breathe
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Thursday, August 8, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Where is the love?Comments on ":Unfailing Me:"
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A former member wrote:
I think everyone makes snap judgments now and then, the difference between a judgmental person and a non-judgmental person being that one sticks to those judgments no matter what whereas the other understands what they have done and is capable of changing their view point. Unfortunately it does seem that a tremendous amount of people look down on others for such superficial reasons.
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On Thursday, August 8, 2013, blue angel
(877)
wrote:
Words masked in surreal understanding of truths within the heart:)~ This is one of my favorites~*_*~ Corydalis for you :)~
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On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thank you...I think. Not sure about that 1 metaphor, Miss Kendra.
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On Thursday, August 8, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
to me nothing is failing or unfailing... Everything happens for a reason. But i try to match the power with the power in order to be who i am that is just me. Judging others for who or what they are is never a good thing and should never be done. This makes the one feel like everything is just nothing and leads us to think that all love has left and will never be seen again. This isn't true but there is so much truth in the words you have penned through this. and the love never leaves we just hide it deep inside and fight to keep it from showing.
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On Friday, August 9, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
I think alot of it is cause & effect, action & reaction, etc. No one should be judged, but it happens. Chaos & discouragement rises...*sigh* love can be difficult to feel in those times. Thanks, Nikki :)
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