Comments by BeautifulCalamity

  • ""her hands fluttered like birds". . . damn, this hurt. ripped my heart out. . completely and scratched at it with jagged nails. AMAZING work on this one, i'm completely feeling this. . pain. . "
    Posted by BeautifulCalamity on ".l.i.e.s." by FindAgentX
  • ""Red butterflies splattered upon the wall cold steel kissing pale skin". . the pictures I am getting from this are incredibly real. . the ending. WHOA, great job on that. "she didnt know she would have such precision in breaking her own heart". . *faves"
    Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Red.butterflies (with Emi)" by FindAgentX
  • " "ignoring the words but basking in the sound of her voice.". . .damn this is a really great piece. this emptiness is very familiar, detached in a way. nicely done "
    Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "smithereens." by FindAgentX
  • ""and leave you to your forgetting".. . well, I really liked this. it was simple. . but oh so strong, captivated and burned me. . breathing machine. . hmm, I'm getting something strange out of this. . too many thoughts at once. great work :)"
    Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "breathing machine" by FindAgentX
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