Comments by Armand
- "Sweet Jane... this is so much more eloquent and relevent than any psalm one might recite at a graveside. if i were a clergy, i would surely use this in my travels. wonderfully done. "
Posted by Armand on "To Dust We Settle" by cre
- "an exercise in similes and metaphors executed brilliantly around the central sea theme, once again affirming your DP diva status. "
Posted by Armand on "A Sad and Dying Sea" by cre
- "yet another gem replete with quotable (if not plagiarizable) lines, my favorite - "Like the wind that fades with the passing storm" . i wish i had your motivation if just to create such beautiful verse.
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Posted by Armand on "I Will Let You Go" by cre
- "characteristically cre, with a touch of robert frost mixed with a half dose of prozac. how beautifully you write, jane, and always time well spent visiting your page and tasting your images. "
Posted by Armand on "any other night" by cre
- ""dreams run down my face" - oh man... i LOVE this line... it says it all so eloquently succinctly. if you werent so popular, i might be inclined to steal it. great piece.
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Posted by Armand on "mood: alone" by cre
- "very original, yet in a style reminiscent of poe - taking a mundame theme to a melodramatic level ... i've read this several times, but still think there is something going on that i am missing. "
Posted by Armand on "The Old Oak Tree" by cre
- "memento mori... "Like half-melted icicles...from the gutters of a wintering house...You were gone." - an absolutely fabulous image and simile! wonderful capture of slow motion tragedy.
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Posted by Armand on "Almost Forever" by cre
- "if i didnt know better, i would have thought you stole this gem from a buried chest of dylan thomas' unpublished works. wow... you took such a mundane event and painted a masterpiece. excellent use of parentheses. "
Posted by Armand on "Blackened Sky" by cre
