Comments by girlafraid
- "the fourth stanza includes lines from the who's "tommy", which i couldn't help but include..."
Posted by girlafraid on "sight" by girlafraid
- "there are parts of you in here that i never knew...sometimes scary parts, not you specifically but the references you can make because of your experiences...i like to believe that you weren't that kid..."
Posted by girlafraid on "zebra stripes and herd logic" by capt_funguy
- "this was so brutally raw, it completely blew me away...i've been back here a few times trying to comment...and every time i read this it makes me want to punch someone for you..."
Posted by girlafraid on "Sugared Words" by flying_fox
- "sometimes, a piece makes me smile even when i don't think it was meant to...but it's only because i see some personal truth within it. this is a lovely reminder of a part of myself...thank you"
Posted by girlafraid on "lines and letters" by Six-Out
- ""and i sighed in the soul of my heart
that such a spirit was delt such harsh seasons"-your words have always been pure beauty, i can return after a lifetime and still find the consitency...lovely piece, thank you for sharing it"
Posted by girlafraid on "The Shining Paladin" by NikesRain
- "the first stanza is really powerful...and the rest leads you along a slow, painful road...leaves the reader feeling broken..."
Posted by girlafraid on "[starlight.sonnet]" by Six-Out
- "this life is nothing but what we make it.
and I've made it hopeless-this is so true...so few people actually see that. I can see why you are proud of this work, it is soft and profound...
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Posted by girlafraid on "rain- [a painted cascade]" by Six-Out
- "that last line twisted my brain around for a second...cause it seemed to be going someplace completely different. I like this one alot. it rules :) "
Posted by girlafraid on "I am your dreams:" by Six-Out
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