hooked (repost by request)

By girlafraid

ok guys, here's an old one that someone wanted to see again...

new love finds me in an old way
and I can't believe how it affects me
you are so much of everything I wanted
and more that I didn't know about
we talk like old friends
fuck like porn
and it's like we always were
and never were
you are too beautiful sometimes
your calm flows over me
drowns me
and I want to breathe it in

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Copyright 2005 girlafraid
Published on Sunday, September 4, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Dancing_Monkey On Monday, April 3, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Chanting

  • Sin On Sunday, October 16, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this was beautiful...from the very first line to the last...i wish that that new love feeling could be bottled up so when things got stale we could just open it up and remember again..loved this ~kristy

  • blue On Saturday, October 15, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    I will join the group of avid admirerers.. Is that even a word? eh, anyway, ya! this was a pure display of heart. ~b

  • A former member wrote: wow that is how i fell but i could never express myself like taht

  • Malice In Wonderland On Tuesday, September 13, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    perfection like this can't be put into words by someone like me. Scholar

  • capt_funguy On Tuesday, September 6, 2005, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    love .. funguy

  • elisa On Sunday, September 4, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    i agree with Nikes....this should be etched in stone....very straight forward........and i couldn't help but smile from start to finish and them some:)

  • elisa On Tuesday, September 13, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    yup.....this still makes my heartbeat with an orgasmic pulse...

  • NikesRain On Sunday, September 4, 2005, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    don't you dare take it down, you're lovely Raina and this is just a sample of your beauty, in mind, in heart, in talent, in all you are......

  • girlafraid On Sunday, September 4, 2005, girlafraid (479)By person wrote:

    yeah, i've never reposted anything...so this probably won't be up for long.

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