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By girlafraid
purity repels the taint
balance
on this sacred ground
their light emanates
i'm comfortable in the shadow
been there all along
i know it like an altar
genuflected respect
choice and chosen
the calling
elation of soul
is exhaustion of mind
but i wholeheartedly had no misconceptions
i am a mere girl
who struggles with two energies
doctor who can cure the boy
(all hope lies with him and none with me)
the acid queen
(pay before we start)
i try so hard
and daily the cherub christs humble me
the difference i make
is not amplification
of brightest light
but the fact
that i can see it
at all
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A former member wrote:
this is magic
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On Wednesday, September 14, 2005, capt_funguy
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wrote:
you were born for this ... they need you so ... " cherub christs " is an amazing pair of words now ... so accurate .... beautiful ... funguy
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On Friday, September 9, 2005, glasshouse
(548) wrote:
This was screaming oh so quietly. I loved every single carefully chosen word. You never cease to create beauty. Dark and lovely. -Glass
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On Friday, September 9, 2005, Solace
(1069) wrote:
This is brilliant, absolute mastery of subtlety and insight...Awe...
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A former member wrote:
nice write girl well done with the rythem i like it alot had a cherry yet dark ring to my ears
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On Thursday, September 8, 2005, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
the fourth stanza includes lines from the who's "tommy", which i couldn't help but include...
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