Comments by capt_funguy
- "the questions inside this will never cease to swirl .. how'd they move that perfect pocket of air when B.F. was talking to peachy peach about kissy kiss? even J.B. Lansing couldn't imagine the weapon he was helping to create and what it "
Posted by capt_funguy on "generating electrons in diatonic waveforms" by Jonas
- "skullface snowman , arms outstretched looking for a hug, ... and there are no coincidences - it's like you aborted the ends of sentences because what you want to say shouldn't be said ..."
Posted by capt_funguy on "exploded head caricature" by Jonas
- "your writes are a playground for anyone who ever stopped for a second... and owned the moon. everything matters - funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "pulp: generation" by Jonas
- "awareness is your strength, and in the writes- it's your ally... i let this piece happen to me a few times over, and i appreciate the peek inside your treasure chest ... there's magic in there ... "
Posted by capt_funguy on "pulp: generation" by Jonas
- "that there last stanza could be placed at the end of all your writes ... and fit as well ... because there is your eloquence .. there is your superhero power ... the eloquence of your moments strung together into living days, years, lifetimes - your aware"
Posted by capt_funguy on "pulp: generation" by Jonas
- "Be it ever so crumbly, there's no place like Rome.
Nero, he was the emperor, and the palace was his home.
But he liked to play with matches and for the fire yearned;
So, he burned Rome to ashes and fiddled while it burned. - B. Bunny"
Posted by capt_funguy on "death rambles in the sweet gaseous intoxicant" by Jonas
- "seems that youve almost got a handle on it... i can hear your awareness better than i can touch it .. this rattled my monkey cage for quite awhile .. please take the ramblings as simple high praise ... thankyou sir ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "death rambles in the sweet gaseous intoxicant" by Jonas
- "you have to share your energy, lest you possess yourself - not necessarily saying you need to write, but at least hum your tune loudly so others can hear - great piece .. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "season" by Jonas
- "interesting, obviously ... logic you can bask in .. the sun gives itself away completely, and we're all thankful for it (again, obviously)- i think it's setting an example for us.."
Posted by capt_funguy on "season" by Jonas
- "this was cool ... i wish you well in touching the many levels in this as you go forward ... you have clarity , and thats all you really need ... good luck .. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "musing" by Jonas
- "old men with soft focus memories , where my ocean is , the sun shining through me in a few billion years , and so much more ... spent some nice time on this ... thanks man .. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "sixty-two years" by Jonas
- "like decoding your day through the dead plenum translator ... what is ... is so much more , and so much less . this made me think about a bunch of things ..."
Posted by capt_funguy on "sixty-two years" by Jonas
- "seething stream of regurge philanthropy... a pleasure to receive .. you make pollution - so dirty .. monstrous is an understatement .. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "3 freewrite" by Jonas
- "a slithering " show me the me" sychophantasy ... i felt empowered by this ... i heard the" gleeng" when i saw the sparkle off your left incisor .. good times ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "self-conscious" by Jonas
- "opalescence all over the place ... mother of pearl , and the animals dont care what you do to them ... thought constellations , connect the dots .... i see a hand ... fuckin fabulous write man ... still a prince to me ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "2.2 freewrite" by Jonas
- "deja this , but damn ,,,, i dig it still , love the heavy stream pouring off of the FUCK verse ... like a perfect hundred letter word reeling ... too cool man ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "missing pieces" by Jonas
- "streamline of priority , calorie count ... energy store ... like lions can't afford to be reckless until the wilderbeast parade through .... no reckless observations here ... beautiful focus kill ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "wallflower" by Jonas
- "just such fluid recall ... like you catch the story before it's never told - help it to get beautiful , and then give it away - thankyou --- funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "buzzkill" by Jonas
