Comments by soul_versing
- "Because that's all you can articulate when your brain is going through spouts of emotional change. I particularly liked your ending, reveals your true emotional state that you're struggling with at this currant time, with no sugarcoating. I want nothing more than to hold you snuggly in my arms. -with... .hugs, puffy pillows and warm chocolate chip cookies."
Posted by soul_versing on "Pieces" by ColorMeToxic
- "I want to hold you snuggly in my arms, and run my fingers though your hair, while telling you how you are truly worth it. I've been here, upon a time. I can only hope that I never face these feelings ever again. I'm here for you, Beth. Email me if you need a shoulder and listening ear. .squeezes tightly. You're truly worth it, you gorgeous poetess, you. "
Posted by soul_versing on "-_-" by ColorMeToxic
- "A self made prison that harbors continuous thoughts that bleed silently beneath the surface. Ooh, appearing normal on the outer shell, only to fall internally buried at the core. I applauded this powerful haiku Beth. Phenomenal, you are! .tips hat and blows a kiss."
Posted by soul_versing on "Cerebral" by ColorMeToxic
- "As hard as it may be... One day you'll have to admit to yourself that you're truly worth it, and always will be. It's hard to relate to how people perceive us; especially when looking through our own eyes. Sometimes we just have to trust and let go of such insecurities to free ourselves from our invisible chains. This was deep, and brought about many feelings. .hugs."
Posted by soul_versing on "Haunted Memories (revised again) -_-" by ColorMeToxic
- "Lack of sleep brings out the best, "as if,
the world
has been sketched
in coalÂ
by a brilliantly
talented hand." And you are the proof. Like a silken spider spinning translucent silhouette webs, driving my hearts continual beat. -Gorgeous, truly gorgeous"
Posted by soul_versing on "Insomniac dreams" by ColorMeToxic
- "You're my hero. Every once in awhile, I glance down at mine... I'm so glad that I'm 'no longer' where I used to be. Everyday is a struggle, but that's where we gain our strength. ...hugs..."
Posted by soul_versing on "scars II" by ColorMeToxic
- "I love a confusion of oneself.. I absolutely love the way it's written, especially, the tone and flow of it. If this is your writers block, then it works wonders for you.."
Posted by soul_versing on "Death March" by ColorMeToxic
